Tuesday, August 25, 2009

Narrative Writing

In Narrative Writing, I wrote a story which combines two really good movies.  The movies were The Polar Express and Peter Pan.  A quick summary would be that a girl boards a train and gets the ride of her life by ending up in a mysterious world.  The best part of my story was that my introduction was amazing .  One thing I could have done better was to improve on my ending, as I felt that I ended it too quickly.

By Mohana.
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7 comments:

  1. tAsChAAugust 25, 2009 at 7:52 PM

    Nice Work!!! Mohana:)

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  2. Mr WoodAugust 26, 2009 at 11:33 AM

    Great reflection, it shows you really thought about your learning. Well done.

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  3. Shweta KAugust 30, 2009 at 4:06 PM

    Good reflection Mohana. I like how you combined two movies together.

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  4. DAmon said .....August 30, 2009 at 4:13 PM

    Great Job Mohana, I really liked the way you joined two stories and made it into your own thing. GREAT JOB!!

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  5. RebeccaAugust 30, 2009 at 4:15 PM

    You have shown a very good description about your Narrative Writing Well Done .

    Rebecca

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  6. KristineAugust 30, 2009 at 4:36 PM

    Awesome work Mohana! It was a good thing for you, to change and make your writing much better.
    Good job!!!

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  7. CamillaSeptember 2, 2009 at 3:36 PM

    Good Work !
    Your blog sounds really awesome !
    Keep up the good work !

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